Critique Image (only members of Study Group One may critique this image)
Review by Maria K-L, 9-4-2014
Thank you Lai for sharing story of Mangrove Apple. In my opinion this is very pleasing image.
I like the subtle color palette and composition. The mountain in the background and open space in the sky makes this image.
N=3, T=3, P=3, E=0, Total=9
Review by Dan C., 9-6-2014
A pleasing presentation. Your nature story is there but a lot of viewers may not realize the presence of that story without your narrative. If used in a competition this is one area where you could be hurt by the judge's lack of knowledge. Some will give you the benefit of the doubt but too many would say I do not understand and score you low.
From a pictorial and technical view point I do not feel you have extracted all the content out of this image that you could legitimately extract. Your sky as shown indicates subtle warm tones. Reducing the overall brightness and slightly boosting saturation (emphasis on slightly) helps bring out these tones and at the same time makes the background mountain range a stronger contributing element. It also brings out the reflections of the mangrove plants in the rippled water.
N=2, T=2, P=3, E=0, Total=7
My name is Lai Hon Foo from Kuching, Sarawak. I started taking photos in 1998 when I bought a film camera, the Samsung AF-333. I like taking photos anywhere I go, especially when traveling. I switched to digital when my sister bought me an Olympus U Digital (compact camera) from Singapore in 2006. I switched to a Samsung ES55 (compact camera) in 2009 and used it until 2010, when I bought a new DSLR Nikon D90 with a used Nikkor Zoom lens, 18-200mm. In the middle of 2012, I purchased a 105mm maco and am now more interested in maco photography.
I hope, I can learn more from study group members and improve my photography. And, I also hope study group members can give me guidance and advice in photography.